"A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?"

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number of countries depend on

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as a main source of income. Currently,

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, which is a popular way of spending time on holidays, is evolving fast. has many positive aspects like job creation and

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of the

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.

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, Because of the

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of cities' infrastructure, the environment is being polluted, which is a drawback. One of the main advantages of

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is infrastructure

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. The most money, which comes from the tourist industry, in general, is spent on buildings: roads, hotels, restaurants, monuments,

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. Another benefit of

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is job creation. In many developed ,countries awe-breathing sights are placed in overcrowded places, where the number of tourists is even bigger than locals. Because of overcrowded

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theY need to recruit workers for different work,

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as tourist guide or room cleaning.

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, brings to the

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pollution of the environment. The

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is inviting

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thousands of tourists from the whole world, and of course, they have different views on environmental protection. Every person on vacation does not really care about the ecosystem of the

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in which he took a trip . Another negative consequence of

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is animals are

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endangered. Rare animals are disappearing

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violent poaching and keeping animals in captivity with power. In my view,

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influences the economy in the best way. Its growth gives us new working places and lets us see splendid foreign cultures

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new information, but we must pay for

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too much. The most important thing is to remember the consequences of

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development

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and find the solution to the environmental problems in the short term.