"A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world?"

Nowadays, a

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number of countries depend on

tourism

as a main source of income. Currently,

tourism

, which is a popular way of spending time on holidays, is evolving fast. has many positive aspects like job creation and

development

of the

country

.

However

, Because of the

development

of cities' infrastructure, the environment is being polluted, which is a drawback. One of the main advantages of

tourism

is infrastructure

development

. The most money, which comes from the tourist industry, in general, is spent on buildings: roads, hotels, restaurants, monuments,

hospitals

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and hospitals

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. Another benefit of

tourism

is job creation. In many developed ,countries awe-breathing sights are placed in overcrowded places, where the number of tourists is even bigger than locals. Because of overcrowded

places

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places,

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theY need to recruit workers for different work,

such

as tourist guide or room cleaning.

Tourism

,

on the other hand

, brings to the

country

pollution of the environment. The

country

is inviting

over

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thousands of tourists from the whole world, and of course, they have different views on environmental protection. Every person on vacation does not really care about the ecosystem of the

country

in which he took a trip . Another negative consequence of

tourism

is animals are

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endangered. Rare animals are disappearing

due to

violent poaching and keeping animals in captivity with power. In my view,

tourism

influences the economy in the best way. Its growth gives us new working places and lets us see splendid foreign cultures

fully

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and fully

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new information, but we must pay for

this

too much. The most important thing is to remember the consequences of

tourism

development

and find the solution to the environmental problems in the short term.