Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sport is one of the most significant activities for having a healthy body. A certain number of people believe that playing with the football team is
poration
of giving the advantages. Correct article usage
a poration
Instead
of, others mean, having sport such
as swimming is best to exercise each person.
On the one hand, playing with team
gives more Add an article
the team
a team
chance
the way to Fix the agreement mistake
chances
successful
and win a prize. In Add a missing verb
be successful
odrer
to, there are several Correct your spelling
order
compitations
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competitions
helds
in many local Correct your spelling
held
holds
area
. Over more, these game awards the player to share Change to a plural noun
areas
thier
happiness when they win in a match. Correct your spelling
their
For example
, some schools oragnis
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organise
organised
matches
between two- classes. In Fix the agreement mistake
match
this
way, teachers encourage children to show their skills and appear their talent during the
sporting time . Correct article usage
apply
Then
, children earn new experiences which is
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are
achieve
to work better in the future.
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achieved
In
the other hand, some adults prefer to have their own space when they are exercising because they want to feel free. Change preposition
On
For instance
, some pepole
are not enough good to swim so, they are shy when they fall into a situation with others who are so good at swimming. Correct your spelling
people
However
, in case
too many Muslim countries sharing sports activity are prohibited in their Correct article usage
the case
religion
rule.
to conclude, sport is beneficial for health and everyone has different position related to their social lifestyle. In my opinion, playing with Replace the word
religious
group
aid to make Correct article usage
a group
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a relationship
the relationship
relationship
with many Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
friend
and award responsibility Fix the agreement mistake
friends
about
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for
other
.Fix the agreement mistake
others
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