Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. hu Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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druing
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during

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last
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years
has
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increase directly in many
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and schools. Some
teacher
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teachers

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believe that international
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student
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students

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swap
it
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apply

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is much more
advantages
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advantageous

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for all
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school
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schools

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.
This
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essay will discuss both of the
effective
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effects

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in detail and provide evidence as to why exchange international
student
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is superior for teenage
school
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.
Firstly
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, that giving chance for
teenager
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a teenager
the teenager

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to earn more experience during
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thier
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their

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studing
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studying

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Than
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Then

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, that award
school
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some of
new
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the new

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experience to
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thier
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their
the

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carrier.
Secondly
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, help
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the student
a student
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student
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students

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to build up
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thier
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their

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personal
experiement
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experiment

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and CV which
is give
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them better
oppernuity
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to raise
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thier
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their

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variant skills.
Finally
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, learning
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form
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other subject make
brain
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wider. In
this
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way,
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the
a

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teenage
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school
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can
also
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make some profits
of
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social
working
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beside
to add
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money to
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school
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budget.
For example
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, teenagers learn other
language
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languages

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and
tradition
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traditions

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which aid them to use in several life fields in the future.
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, if younger children move to
another countries
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another country
other countries

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sometimes may
also
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force some different trouble with living and learn languages.
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,
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the student
a student
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student
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students

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may have
defficulties
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difficulties

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to
conect
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with each other in
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or may feel alone for
long
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-term ;
than
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be away from
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thier
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their

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family. To conclude, comparing between positive and negative both f these
side
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have own reason to choose
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thier
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their

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descion
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decision
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