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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. hu Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The pattern of exchanging
student
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druing
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during
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has
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 increase directly in many
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universities
 and schools. Some
teacher
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teachers
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 believe that international
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student
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students
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 swap
it
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apply
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is much more
advantages
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advantageous
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 for all
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school
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.
This
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 essay will discuss both of the
effective
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effects
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 in detail and provide evidence as to why exchange international
student
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 is superior for teenage
school
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Firstly
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, that giving chance for
teenager
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a teenager
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 to earn more experience during
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thier
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their
studing
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studying
.
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, that award
school
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new
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 experience to
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thier
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their
the
 carrier.
Secondly
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, help
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the student
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student
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students
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 to build up
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thier
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their
 personal
experiement
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experiment
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is give
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 them better
oppernuity
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opportunity
 to raise
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thier
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their
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Finally
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, learning
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from
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form
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from
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 other subject make
brain
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the brain
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 wider. In
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teenage
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school
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schools
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 can
also
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 make some profits
of
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 social
working
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 beside
to add
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adding
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 money to
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school
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the school
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 budget.
For example
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, teenagers learn other
language
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languages
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 and
tradition
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traditions
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 which aid them to use in several life fields in the future.
On the other hand
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, if younger children move to
another countries
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another country
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 sometimes may
also
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 force some different trouble with living and learn languages.
For instance
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,
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the student
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student
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students
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 may have
defficulties
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difficulties
 to
conect
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connect
 with each other in
calssess
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classes
 or may feel alone for
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a long
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 -term ;
than
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then
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be away from
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thier
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their
 family. To conclude, comparing between positive and negative both f these
side
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 have own reason to choose
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thier
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their
descion
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decision
designs
.

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