Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

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Nowadays,
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start to forget about
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importance of
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by industrialism and modernity.
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the reasons and solutions od
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with, cities began to develop really fast, and
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of trees, that gives us air
people
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now build buildings and facilities. Questions about
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are now being ignored,
people
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think only about how to make
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urban
more developed and industrial.
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,
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care more about cars, they want the modernist cars that make
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the air
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and
nature
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around them more polluted
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they are.
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, cars are causing global warming, everyone should realize that soon they will live in
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an oven at
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rate. What can individuals do to teach others about
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the importance
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of
natural
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the natural
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world? The
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solutions
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– giving lectures, every school,
universities
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university
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should make a meeting with students about how our planet is dying day
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be
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day
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. The
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on social media and social apps, despite how it sounds, it may be the best and simplest solution. It can reach more
people
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pf
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all ages. Unlike students, older ages have
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power to change
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ones
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opinion
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opinions
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about
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and make them realize how is important. In conclusion, now there is an era when individuals do not know the
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principle
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principal
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principle
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of
environment
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the environment
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. Mother
nature
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is one who
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us everything to exist.
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,
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advertises
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advertisers
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and
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are the ways to let them understand.
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