In advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays there are indeed many advertisements for businesses that emphasize their products in different ways especially to bring awareness about their novelty . In
this
essay. I am going to explain that this
is a positive development.
Firstly
, companies want to increase their cash in flow
. Because Correct your spelling
inflow
this
is one way to level up your business. For example
, if a company
makes $1000000 in a month, by advertising a new product that has completely
a new look, most likely they can get an income higher than $1000000 in the exact same period of Replace the word
completed
time
. Thisway
the Correct your spelling
This way
This was
company
can grow fast in a short time
. This
is also
good for economy
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the economy
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and export to Fix the agreement mistake
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other lands, Correct article usage
apply
who
are Correct pronoun usage
which
intrested
in Correct your spelling
interested
a new looking products
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
new looking products
a new looking product
secondly
, making and emphasizing products that are not the same as all other items, can show your skills and creativity. This
makes your enterprise famous. For example
when a car company
launches his
new vehicle, when you touch it will automatically change in a different couler and Change the word
a
this
is what all about. something very unique and at the same time
this
is what people want to see.
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apply
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have said so Change the capitalization
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for
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far
i
think it is a positive development. duo to the fast forward changing technology it is important to move forward and go with the flow. Change the capitalization
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This
makes your company
growing
fast. And at the same Wrong verb form
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time
increase
the amount of costumer's for your Add a comma
,increase
busniss
.Correct your spelling
business
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite