Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

Early childhood diseases

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the major

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of death globally.

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rate could be diminished once

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vaccination

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the vaccination

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law is abided by the public

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some parents are against

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vaccination

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hand, following the scheduled immunisation chart is imperative

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children for

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to maintain the optimum health level in

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a way they will not be easily contracted

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different bacteria and viruses.

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, following the implemented rules of government to bring the child

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vaccination

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.

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humanity since everyone were vaccinated and it will decrease the number of early childhood death.

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, some parents preferred not to immunise their

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because of the side effects that they have had observed in vaccinated

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.

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, polio

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in the Philippines has bad effects

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others

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they became crippled;

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suffered

their entire life utilizing crutches

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, others became futile.

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, guardians tend to follow their human instinct not to give their child any form of

vaccines

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, rather they will seclude their child from others.

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, in the long

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the youth will be affected immensely since their immunity is declined. In summary,

vaccination

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is crucial to

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stabilized

childrens' immunity

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to the disadvantages that it may bring. At the end of the day, parents

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the freedom to choose the best for their children

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whether

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to get vaccinated or not.