Early childhood diseases
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the major
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of death globally.
MortalityCorrect article usage
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rate could be diminished once
vaccinationCorrect article usage
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law is abided by the public
however
some parents are against
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vaccination
.
On the
first
hand, following the scheduled immunisation chart is imperative
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children for
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to maintain the optimum health level in
such
a way they will not be easily contracted
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different bacteria and viruses.
For instance
, following the implemented rules of government to bring the child
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vaccinationCorrect article usage
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.
Thus
, it will be good for
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humanity since everyone were vaccinated and it will decrease the number of early childhood death.
On the other hand
, some parents preferred not to immunise their
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because of the side effects that they have had observed in vaccinated
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.
For example
, polio
vaccination
in the Philippines has bad effects
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others
like Correct word choice
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they became crippled;
their entire life utilizing crutches
likewise
, others became futile.
Consequently
, guardians tend to follow their human instinct not to give their child any form of
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, rather they will seclude their child from others.
However
, in the long
the youth will be affected immensely since their immunity is declined.
In summary,
vaccination
is crucial to
childrens' immunity
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to the disadvantages that it may bring. At the end of the day, parents
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the freedom to choose the best for their children
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to get vaccinated or not.