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WRITE A CLASSIFICATION ESSAY ABOUT TYPES OF RELAXING PLACES

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Nowadays, As society grows,
people
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 have to do more work than before.
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 has led to mental and health stress. For that reason, there are many
places
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 that can help these
people
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 relax after stressful work hours. There are many
places
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 to reduce stress, but they can be classified into three types:
sports
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places
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, fun
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, and far away destinations. For teenagers, entertaining destinations are one of the
places
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 to relax after stressful hours at school. Entertainment venues are diverse. It can be cinemas, shopping malls, or video game stores.
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, students after a tiring day of school, there is nothing better than going to watch a
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 movie with their friends at the theatre.
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 entertainment
places
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,
sports
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centers
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 are one of the positions to help
people
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 release negative energy in their bodies. There are many types of
sports
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places
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 that
people
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 can choose to play,
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 as football fields, pools or a
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.
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,
people
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 can buy tickets to watch a football match and cheer for their
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 team in the stadium. To be able to relax, it is not necessary to go to bustling and crowded
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. For some introverts, the best
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 for them after an exhausting day at work is a faraway destination. It could be a resort far from the city or a small cafe in the pine forest. It would be great to have a hot cup of coffee and watch the mountains in a quiet
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. In conclusion, the destinations above are all common positions to lie down.
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, for each of us, the
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place
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 we think of when we feel tired and annoyed is a suitable
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 to relax.
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