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Write a classification essay about types of different places to relax

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Nowadays, As society grows,
people
 have to do more work than before.
This
 has led to mental and health stress. For that reason, many
places
 can help these
people
 relax after stressful work hours. Many
places
 reduce stress, but they can be classified into
sports
, fun, and far away destinations. For teenagers, entertaining destinations are one of the
places
 to relax after stressful hours at school. Entertainment venues are diverse. It can be cinemas, shopping malls, or video game stores.
For example
, students, after a tiring day of school, there is nothing better than going to watch a favourite movie with their friends at the theatre.
Besides
 entertainment
places
,
sports
 centres are one of the positions to help
people
 release negative energy in their bodies. There are many
sports
places
 that
people
 can choose to play,
such
 as football fields, pools or a
sports
 centre.
In addition
,
people
 can buy tickets to watch a football match and cheer for their favourite team in the stadium. To be able to relax, it is not necessary to go to bustling and crowded
places
. For some introverts, the best
place
 for them after an exhausting day at work is a faraway destination. It could be a resort far from the city or a small cafe in the pine forest. It would be great to have a hot cup of coffee and watch the mountains in a quiet
place
. In conclusion, the destinations above are all joint positions to lie down.
However
, the
first
place
 we think of when we feel tired and annoyed is a suitable
place
 to relax for each of us.
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