You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir and Madam, I writing

this

letter to inform you that I have seen your notice about looking for someone who can take care of you kind who is 6years old and I have interesting in

this

job indeed. My family is big, My dad and mom have 5 children including me,and I am a big sister who has to help my parent look after my brother and my sister as well and I am really into it without boring.

For instance

when our parent wasn't at home.I have to prepare food and management of their like taking a shower and doing homework.I love the way when I am with them.

In addition

,I have experience of work as a babysitter at the Baby boo centre in the position of assistant supervisor.I have worked there for 2 years.And I

also

got rewards from the best staff there. So you can make sure that I really love to taking care of your kind

also

Moreover

, I'd like to have a challenge abroad and explore a place where I have never been and learn new things with people who have different cultures from me.It will be great.If I can do

this

by doing

this

job. If you have any questions about me.please don't hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Bella

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

219 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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The Greeting

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