Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals have their beliefs that it is in the best interest

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the rest of the

world

, where information that has been gained in

the

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scientific research, business and the academic

world

should be passed along amongst

others

. While there

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other people that have their views that passing along valuable information

to

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easy can only be a

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disadvantage

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I will explain both sides of

this

and share my own opinion. Sharing important

details

to

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others

could give the possibility for these individuals that

recieves

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receives

it to share

valuabe

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valuable

data

back.

Firstly

, if the people in these different worlds were to give

eachother

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each other

details

aswell

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as feedback, they would have the ability to receive both positive and negative

data

back. From there they will have a chance to correct their mistake and

also

be able to continue with their project.

For instance

, if a

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businessman

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business man

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were to have some beneficial detail that would contribute to the

scientist

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work and would share

this

along it could potentially lead to something huge that could change the course

on

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his project.

On the other hand

, giving out

details

that

is

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valuable

to

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easy could lead to it

be

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placed in the wrong

persons

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hand. In saying that, there

is

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humans in

this

world

that do not believe in other

individuals

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right to live their lives as they please.

For example

, in the middle east where the terrorist rules, if they receive that

data

it could be used in

negative

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way to harm

others

and have the ability

to

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become a disaster.

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has

also

been shown in a recent study that was done by NATO, that if we were to pass around information that

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both good and bad around the

world

for everyone to gain, it could be used

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either way. To sum it up,it is beneficial for people in

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different worlds to give

others

details

, but there is

also

a risk factor when doing so.

Therefore

, I think it is more important to protect civilians than everyone having access to all the

data

. I

also

believe it is crucial that

researcher

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aswell

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as well

as other worlds do share amongst

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each other

as long as

it

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safe to do so.