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In some countries,university students live away from home and in another city while studying.Do you think the disadvantage outweighs the advantages?

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An increasing concern for University
students
 in various
notions
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nations
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 around the world is staying
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in other
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other city
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another city
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 far away from home.In
this
 essay,
i
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 will examine the pros and cons of
this
 phenomenon and provide my overall opinion. From an overall
perspective
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 there are a number of
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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 for University
students
 living
another
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in another
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 city without family.One of the most obvious of
this
 is
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a student
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student
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students
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 may
out
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be out
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 of
parents
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parents'
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 governance.
For instance
,they are out of control from their parents.
As a result
,they lead
a
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undisciplined
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undiscipline
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undisciplined
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 life and become disobedient.
In addition
,They not only suffer from healthy food and
hygienic
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a hygienic
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 environment but
also
struggling
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struggle
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 with financial issues. On the
flipside
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flip side
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,
stay
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staying
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 away from
own
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your own
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 residents has some
advantage
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advantages
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.Perhaps the main advantage is that
attand
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attend
 the class timely.
For example
,if any
student
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students
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live
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lives
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 near the university they can their classes without any
hastle
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hassle
.
Furthermore
,
students
 can get facilities from
library
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the library
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 and lab etc.
Students
also
 feel that they are free from family rules and regulations. To sum up,Having considered both the negative and positive views
living
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of living
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 far away from home.I completely affirm that its disadvantage outweighed its advantages.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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