Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money money on other things to benefit the nation . To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays exploring the galaxy has become increasingly common around the world.
However
, some people think that the funds used on these projects could be used to strengthen countries. I totally agree with
this
opinion and believe that governments should use their money to improve their states' Well being care facilities and
also
improve roads.
Firstly
, many nations in Africa have very poor
well being
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systems which are mainly due to
lack
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of resources to sustain quality healthcare .
For example
, most hospitals in Southern Africa do not have medicine, equipment etc 
that is
needed in order to treat patients accurately up to standard.
This
is why leaders should allocate funds to their nations
instead
of wasting them to explore space.
Secondly
, most countries in the developing world have very bad transport systems, if people that govern these nations prioritize finances in making good roads a lot of recorded road traffic accidents may reduce.
For instance
, many fatal car crashes happen in Africa mostly because of poor road networks.
Hence
, using cash to explore space is not beneficial at all. In conclusion, I argue that even though exploring the galaxy may benefit the world, Most developing states have a lot of problems to work on which include providing quality healthcare care and improving roads,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
  • international cooperation
  • inspire
  • engage
  • boost the economy
  • long-term benefits
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