Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music
has become widespread in the world because of technological advancements. Though, some individuals believe that it is a good way to gather people
of various cultures and ages together. In my opinion, it’s not true at all times and varies from music
to music
.
There are some reasons for my disagreement. There are some people
that are holding strong religious beliefs that think of music
as guilt. Though, they may be so strict that even open up a fight with whoever listens to music
. And not all individuals have the same taste in music
. Like those who live in Asia compared to those who live in Africa. On the other hand
, there are many types of music
that are not everyone’s favourite. In other words
, it simply doesn’t suit different age groups. Such
as rap and rock music
which mostly
youngsters have been listening to while the elderly Replace the word
most
favors
to Fix the agreement mistake
favor
listen
classic Add the preposition
tolisten
music
with more focus on actual instruments rather than digital sounds.
On the other side, I agree with the idea that music
can make stronger bonds between people
, but in certain conditions. Firstly
, it must be non-biased. By that I mean, there should not be any type of hate or harassment or showing love to a specific person. For example
, music
that is
not biased,
is those without singing like Jazz. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the National songs
of each country are one type of music
that can unite people
in a country. While we see that people
in various parts of the country and with different spoken languages sing their countries' National Song with each other and feel encouraged by it. For instance
, in Olympics
we see countries have been singing their National Add a comma
,Olympics
songs
before the competition starts.
In conclusion, there are many types of music
which
do not suit everyone. Correct pronoun usage
that
However
certain songs
are not biased and Add a missing verb
are favored
favored
by many, like National Change the spelling
favoured
Songs
. I hold an opinion that if the criteria for a song are fulfilled. It can reunite people
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