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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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 has become widespread in the world because of technological advancements. Though, some individuals believe that it is a good way to gather
people
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 of various cultures and ages together. In my opinion, it’s not true at all times and varies from
music
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 to
music
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. There are some reasons for my disagreement. There are some
people
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 that are holding strong religious beliefs that think of
music
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 as guilt. Though, they may be so strict that even open up a fight with whoever listens to
music
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. And not all individuals have the same taste in
music
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. Like those who live in Asia compared to those who live in Africa.
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, there are many types of
music
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 that are not everyone’s favourite.
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, it simply doesn’t suit different age groups.
Such
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 as rap and rock
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 which
mostly
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 youngsters have been listening to while the elderly
favors
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listen
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 classic
music
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 with more focus on actual instruments rather than digital sounds. On the other side, I agree with the idea that
music
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 can make stronger bonds between
people
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, but in certain conditions.
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, it must be non-biased. By that I mean, there should not be any type of hate or harassment or showing love to a specific person.
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,
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that is
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 not biased
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 is those without singing like Jazz.
In addition
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, the National
songs
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 of each country are one type of
music
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 that can unite
people
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 in a country. While we see that
people
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 in various parts of the country and with different spoken languages sing their countries' National Song with each other and feel encouraged by it.
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, in
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 we see countries have been singing their National
songs
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 before the competition starts. In conclusion, there are many types of
music
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which
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 do not suit everyone.
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 certain
songs
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 are not biased and
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are favored
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favored
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 by many, like National
Songs
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. I hold an opinion that if the criteria for a song are fulfilled. It can reunite
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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