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you recently organized all day meeting for your company which took place in a local hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude for successfully hosting the annual business meeting of taco time in your hotel on the 20th of March 2022.
Also
, I would like to provide reviews on the food quality. I am pleased to share that our staff members liked your customer service. The conference room is spacious and well-managed for all day.
In addition
, the hotel management is very friendly and supportive. one thing that our member complained about is the meal element. The snack was not served on time and was cold. what's more, the chicken was overlooked and stale. To maintain your hotel's reputation, I suggest you work on the kitchen and cuisine services. Ask your master chefs to check the cuisine's nature before displaying and styling the Banff. I hope to get better foodstuff conditions in the future. Yours faithfully, Sukhwinder Kaur Ranu
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