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in many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first month after the birth of their baby. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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An increasing concern for women in various nations around the world is taking
maternity
 leave from their work at the earliest age of their
baby’s
 babyhood. In
this
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 I will examine the pros and cons of
this
 phenomenon and provide my overall opinion. From an overall
perspective
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 there are two key advantages of
maternity
 vacation. A
further
 point in favour of
maternity
 recess is that
mother
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 can give much time for her
baby’s
 look after. If a
mother
 gets off for a single month from her office, she will get adequate time for her
baby’s
 shower,
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breastfeeding
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breast feeding
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, dress change, oil massage and so on.
In addition
,
mother
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 can take rest for her good health as well as her
baby’s
.
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 –
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recent
statistics
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 carried out by a journal that about 65%
service-holder
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 women
suffers
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 from nutrition issues who go to
office
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 after giving a
child birth
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, because
,
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lack
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 of ample time they do not eat healthy food and do not take rest properly. On the flip side,
maternity
 vacation has numerous drawbacks. One of the most obvious of these is
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woman
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 will
lost
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her
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 work speed and become unfamiliar with new rules and development.
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 update their rules and policy which is related to their goals and every employee need to introduce
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it
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, whereas,
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 are difficult for the
mother
 who was on vacation.
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, when an employee gets off from work there will create a
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 vacancy.
As a result
,
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authority
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authorities
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 will suffer much to refill
such
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 with
exact
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 skilled
person
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 which is really an obstacle
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 the enhancement of
organization
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. In conclusion, having considered both the negative and positive views of
maternity
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 leave policy, I completely affirm that its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
Submitted by M.L.A on

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maternity leave
  • essential bonding
  • recovery time
  • mental health
  • postpartum depression
  • long-term child development
  • female participation
  • labor force
  • gender equality
  • parental leave
  • economic impacts
  • temporary loss
  • workload
  • small businesses
  • accommodate
  • operations
  • perpetuating
  • gender stereotypes
  • caregiving
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