With fast pace of modern life more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the
modertn
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modern
era, fast-
food
restaurants are ubiquitous as they are indispensable for busy
people
. Regarding
this
, there are pros and cons to
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fast
food
.
However
, I strongly believe that the drawback of eating fast
food
overwhelm the benefit. On the one hand, fast
food
is efficient. Since a significant number of
people
suffer from hectic
sckedule
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schedule
in contemporary society, cooking by themselves is
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. They do not have enough time to go to a market, bring ingredients, and wash dishes.
Hence
, many
people
eat fast
food
which
people
can quickly eat.
Moreover
, fast
food
is economical as the price is lower than other meals.
For example
, a survey conducted by
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Cambodia
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university has revealed that almost 20% of citizens rely on fast
food
as they cannot afford proper meals.
Therefore
, it is
no
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reasonable
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reason
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to point out that consuming fast
food
is fast and economical.
On the other hand
, fast
food
is harmful to health because chemicals
such
as MSG, preserves which make better tastes and help them save a long time are used in order to
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more and more.
In addition
, a lot of sugar and salt are
also
used to make
a
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savory
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fast
food
. In terms of
this
, not only can
a
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consumption of high
sugarly
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sugary
sugar
food
on a regular basis causes obesity, but it may
also
contribute to other major health issues
such
as diabetes and high blood pressure.
For instance
, recent media in Korea reports that the conditions of almost 30% of kids who have
asthmas
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and allergies and eat fast
food
regularly become worse due to respiratory symptoms. As the example
clearlly
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clearly
illustrates, fast
food
is reasonable
to
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be called junk
food
. In conclusion, while I accept that fast
food
can sometimes be rather efficient, there is no doubt to point out that
the
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demerit of it is more serious than
the
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merit.
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