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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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The charts give information about the activities that young people do in their free time. There is one graph for each gender and they are going
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 analyzed in different paragraphs. The prefered activity for boys is computer games numbering
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 Basketball, Soccer and Skateboarding with 26% , 17% and 11% respectively. Most of the girls (27%) choose to dance in their free time. That activity is followed by reading (21%). The
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lowest among the girl's activities is listening to music which was chosen by only 10% of the girls. The sports played by girls are gymnastics and netball. They
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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