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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to request you to give me a chance to
work
 at the head office in Ottawa, So , That I can enhance my knowledge and gain some foreign
work
 experience. To be precise, there are several reasons beyond the request which will help to expand our business overseas successfully .I have been working here since 2018 and learned many professional and personal skills for the development of my personality. I want to try my management skills to
work
 with a diverse workforce. The abilities will help me to manage my father’s office in my home country. Apart from , I will keep an eye on the emails and provide support for any urgent calls if needed. In my absence ,my assistant Monika will do my office
work
. I taught her all the required skills for the
work
. I am eagerly waiting for your positive response to the request. Yours faithfully, Sukhwinder
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