Scientific developments even farming always bring major benefits. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays ,scientific
researches
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influenced
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all fields even farming.It has been suggested that the manufactured crops could inflict harm on nature. In my opinion, cultivating in
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way under control can boost
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agriculture. It is my view that searching on plant major has a numerous positive effect on eatable plants in order to
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programs will help to produce some fruit and
vegtable
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vegetable
vegetables
on a large scale include peach,
whatermelon
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watermelon
,orange and so on,
therefore
, the taste of products can be
infuencedtoo
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influenced too
. they become more tasty, aromatic and watery. there is another significant point,scientists
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of chemical fertilizers will be reduced by the recent developments. From environmental and medical perspectives, pesticides are a threat to humans and animals, in order
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, natural pesticides
such
as a
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range
of insects are replaced by dangerous poisons
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economic viewpoint, the countries with modern agriculture benefit from several recruitment opportunities.
In contrast
, some people claim that modification in farming crops can eliminate the
nuture
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nurture
cycle balance. They firmly insist that vegetables should grow in
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wild way. From their point of view altering the plant growth and
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their feature is more likely to extinction
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some special species.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as these scientists who work in booster research
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theoretical education are aware
about
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this
subject and cater for the issue
then
start the
developmants
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development
developments
program. In conclusion, I completely agree with
this
idea about farming by cooperating with science because they can produce
fruite
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fruit
fruits
with higher duality and
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application of pesticides. Economic is grown by
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system too.
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