Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Fully explain your ideas

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree ith this view.

A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Technology has made man more social or less social Discuss both views and give opinion

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