Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that environmental issues should be solved globally while
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of them supports dealing with them nationally. Nowadays, there are so many incidental
problems
in our environment. We encounter them each day, almost in every
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. So, peoples
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all over the world are in the process of finding solutions
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these
problems
. We have two ways
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recovering
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situation: One of them is by groups of several countries
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detailed
dealed
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working together on it, and another one is solving
this
in states, not globally. Each approach has its own pros and cons, on one side. But both have
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same ambition.
That is
why it is acceptable and effective, whether reaching the aim among countries or in a single nation. There is an opportunity
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many thoughts to easily find a solution for the
problems
. In
this
case, we should work collectively with other communities. The more ideas we have, the more chances we will get.
On the other hand
, it is
also
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fact that
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country has its private environmental position that only
this
nation knows and can obtain their best result on those
problems
.
However
, from my point of view, strength is in unity. So, global movement is the best way for our purpose.
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  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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