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Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: · Explain the situation · Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date · Ask for a different date to present your thesis

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Dear Mr Rakesh, I am writing
this
 to request you
for extending
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 my thesis
project
presentation
 date by two weeks which was originally planned
on
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 24th, November 2024. My father has informed me about the dates for my sister's marriage which is falling in the same week as my thesis
project
presentation
 date. He was handling all the
prepartions
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preparations
preparation
, but recently, he is not feeling well so he wants me to help him with my sister's marriage preparations in
the
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Spain. I have been an excellent student throughout
this
 academic year and secured first place in the
last
semester
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 exams. I have
also
 submitted my
project
 three weeks prior to the deadline.
Additionally
, I participated in the Robo competition and won second prize for our college. I would request you to extend my
presentation
 date by two weeks, so that, I could help my father in organizing my sister's wedding event and later give my best to prepare for my thesis
project
presentation
. Yours sincerely, Sandeep
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task achievement
Provide a more detailed explanation of why your presence is crucial for your sister's marriage preparations to strengthen your case.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional words or phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
Your writing tone is polite and respectful, which is suitable for a formal letter to a professor.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear opening, body, and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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