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I am writing
this
letter to express my support for Miss
Akbota
Aman in her application for the two-year Master of Public Health (MPH).
Akbota
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Kubota
is a medical graduate whom I have known for 2 years since she was enrolled in the Residency program at Nazarbayev University School of Medicine in 2020. She is
such
a brilliant
student
displaying outstanding academic abilities and allocating both her learning and professional practices and wide range of interest in healthcare. I was
Akbota
’s rotation preceptor and supervisor for the
research
work
clinical
case
called “Erythema ab igne”. Over the past two years, I have witnessed her tremendous growth and maturity as a
student
at the University. Her academic performance has significantly grown, and
also
professional skills have drastically improved. I can define
Akbota
as a greatly enthusiastic and highly responsible person who has proven
this
while working on the article. She showed some serious skills, and it was clearly evident that
Akbota
researched many books and journals as well as relevant websites. She presented new and interesting ideas and conclusions based on her performance. She displayed a serious attitude toward her project, providing and reporting outstanding and realistic analytical theories. Overall, her role in writing the article can be divided into 4 parts: analyzing history, collecting data, direct contact with patients, and literature review. Her clinical
case
research
work
about erythema was well-grounded and thoroughly structured. She spent the entire 2 years of her program focusing on and analyzing papers on the topic of
this
work
. She did a lot in tutoring and managing MD
students
in UMC hospital
departments
, providing diagnostics, and treatment of children in the different
departments
, assessing clinical skills of medical
students
, attending
student
case
conferences; participating in clinical
research
called ‘Celiac disease’ with other residents, and assisting in providing information for MPH and MMM
students
,
doctors
of
departments
. She filled out and analyzed medical records together with me.
Akbota
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Kubota
also
helped me in The Paediatric Rheumatology International Trials Organisation (PRINTO) conducting pneumatological clinical trials; participating in Concilium with other
doctors
, providing direct translations from English to the patients and
doctors
; making presentations (
case
conferences) for
doctors
, interns, and MD
students
in the
departments
. She
also
collected information about six patients with Juvenile Idiopathic Arthritis in PRINTO. She currently wants to continue her education in MPH and I am happy for her. I believe that she does her best and will contribute to our country by healing a lot of suffering people.
Akbota
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Kubota
Aman has demonstrated herself to be a dedicated, disciplined, and capable master's
student
. She has mastered a set of profile discipline training materials throughout her studies.
Moreover
, I can give an «excellent» rating in terms of evaluating her performance in general education subjects.
In addition
, I have noticed her attitude towards seeking new knowledge regarding her
research
works.
Akbota
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Kubota
is composed, well-balanced, and approachable. She understands critical comments and has a problem-solving mind. She has clearly and responsibly completed the tasks assigned to her. In the end, she presented her perfect
research
work
. Relying on my experience of working with
Akbota
Aman I truly believe that she will succeed in the program of your University. We hope that she will develop into a professional who is dedicated to her
work
.
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