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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those relates to science and technology. discuss both views and give your own poinion.

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Selection of the
programme
 that the person is going to enrol
at
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 the
university
 is one of the most important decisions and has a great influence
in
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on
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 the
future
. Some people believe that students should study what they are interested in, while
other
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others
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 think they should choose a
programme
will
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that will
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 help them in their
future
.
This
 essay will discuss both arguments On the one hand,
university
 students should be allowed to choose their preferred
programme
 freely without any kind of pressure either from parents or anyone else.
Student’s
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A student’s
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 desire for a particular subject at the
university
 plays an essential role in improving his academic achievement. That explains why the students who love and enjoy their studying usually get better results
at
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 exams.
Besides
, nowadays, many pedagogical experts are encouraging parents to let their children make their
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own
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won
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own
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 choices when it comes to
selection
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the selection
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 of
university
programme
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programmes
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 believing that it will impact positively on their
future
carer
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carers
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.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that the world has changed
since
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 the past because of
the
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apply
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technological progression, and in order to keep up
these
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with these
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 changes, it’s necessary to choose a
university
programme
 that can fulfil the advanced needs of
present
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the present
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 time and the coming
future
.
For instance
, studying IT (information technology) is very trendy nowadays, and it can be considered
as
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one of the most successful
university
 programmes
especially
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 after the
wide spread
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 of modern technological innovations. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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 giving the chance for the children to choose the subject they want can be more productive.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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