Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Dear Sirs Subject: Complain of

bus

unavailability In connection to the

above mentioned

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subject, and in reference to my previous online

complain

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number 1233, dated on

first

of October 2019, I am writing to express my

deeply

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dissatisfaction, in

regards

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of

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the

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bus

number 222, working on

the

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line 12, which connected between

city

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the city

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center

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and the Jordan

university

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. In fact, I am an engineering

students

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in

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the

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Jordan university and

i

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life

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in the town down,

therefore

,

i

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used to pick

the

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above mentioned

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bus

every day to reach my university and go back to my accommodation,

however

, due to the fact that the

bus

is always delay

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,

this

cause

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me a lot of problems with my professors, and made me always embarrassed because I usually came late to my lecture,

moreover

, despite

of

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my annual membership with your transportation company, I normally ordered

taxi

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in my way back because the

bus

is not available after five Pm, which increased my daily expenses dramatically. Based on the above, I can offer some

suggestion

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suggestions

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which could enhance the situation, adding a

second

extra

bus

for instance

can make a big difference

specially

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that

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since

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the mentioned

bus

line is usually busy,

also

, adding a GBS tracker on the

bus

can make a strict control on the

bus

movement. In the end, I would be great full if you take

this solutions

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in

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consideration,

also

,

i

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hope

this

problem to be solved as soon as possible, and looking forward

hearing

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from you.

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Your

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Faithfully ADEL