The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Global

healthcare

has been improved significantly in the

last

century.

However

, some believe that the average health of individuals is going to reduce in the future. To my way of thinking,

the

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healthcare

is actually going to improve and fewer people will get sick.

The

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healthcare

is going to improve, Because, rapid technological advancements and new scientific discoveries will introduce higher quality

healthcare

and more significant, make it widespread

that

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everyone could benefit from it.

In addition

, New achievements in personalized medicine and precise prescriptions will be reducing adverse drug

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effects

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affects

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effects

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which are responsible for

inconvenience

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the inconvenience

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of patients or even deaths.

On the other hand

, there will be

less disease

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fewer diseases

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in

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50 years from now. The reason

to

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this

is mostly because of social distance which has been

became

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becoming

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a new habit recently. Though, less face to face

contacts

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means less transition of diseases

between

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among

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humans.

For example

for Covid-19, social distancing helped a bunch to control the pandemic.

On the contrary

,

although

many people have bad diet routines and eat unhealthy food

everyday

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,

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, the number of those who care about their food intake is gradually increasing.

For instance

, these days people can buy special food provided for

small

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the small

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dietary

group

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groups

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, like vegetarians, in every

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supermarket

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super market

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. In summary,

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will be more precise

healthcare

along with

fewer

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a fewer

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number of

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diseases in the future. my short term view on

healthcare

is that it

depend

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on how fast the science advances. Though, I hope to see

such

improvements any time sooner.