Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?
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some
various perspectives in Correct quantifier usage
apply
regards
to Fix the agreement mistake
regard
success
, and that includes successful
in profession, health, and relationships. Replace the word
success
However
, in general, people
seems
to believe that the basis of Correct subject-verb agreement
seem
success
is on the financial aspects of the individual. Today, I will argue on whether this
mindset is a good identification of success
, as well as
adding some other far significant
forms of Add a hyphen
far-significant
this
. Wealth is one way to identify a person
's success
, however
in
looking at Change preposition
apply
people
's winning in life should not
only about the money aspect, but individuality as well. If rich Add a missing verb
be not
people
don't have compassion to
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for
others
, especially to
those Change preposition
for
population
with low economic status Fix the agreement mistake
populations
then
they are arrogant with no contribution to humanity's moral success
. A wealthy person
is a successful person
when he achieved
the basis of goodness in life, and Wrong verb form
achieves
become
an inspiration to Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
others
. My stand in measuring successfulness is to know ones
capability to be humane, regardless of acquiring matters that are needed to live comfortably, Change to a genitive case
one's
for instance
, affording branded clothes, new model cars and the likes
. I acknowledge victory when the Fix the agreement mistake
like
person
itself
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apply
hustle
to aim Correct subject-verb agreement
hustles
it
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for it
while
valuing the relationship he or she has with others
. In conclusion, optimum success
is something that we should not just verify through looks and materials. We should also
try to investigate people
's level of success
by assessing the
character and how inspirational they are to our generation. Change the word
their
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, Correct your spelling
After all
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an individuals
individuals
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individuals'
individual's
success
should attract others
through kindness and compassion, to convert thriving to living. Everybody have
their hardest times, and they get through Change the verb form
has
this
whenever they look up on
successful Change preposition
to
people
who can be a good example for them to go on in life.Submitted by esternonwena123 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion