Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work it their free time.This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.

Certain individuals are of the opinion that

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youngsters must assist in communal activities during their leisure time,as

this

will be beneficial to them and to the

community

.l completely agree, with

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notion that,doing so will be a good decision. One of the main reasons why taking part in communal services is vital for students is the fact that

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they attain

skills

crucial for work experience after training.

Also

,these activities involve working with elderly people who are wiser

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and have different

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expertise

.As a result,

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will shape their behaviour, character and social life,

thus

they end up becoming mature, responsible and caring

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young

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adults.

For example

,if these activities are continually done with elders who are

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about their dwelling,they

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learn how to

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nurture

their relationship and care for the environment.The more they are exposed to

community

work, the

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and sociable they become.

Furthermore

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job

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benefit boys and girls by allowing them to put their academic knowledge into practice,

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which

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has merits in developing their

skills

in the

community

.

Therefore

,they have learnt to be innovative and creative during their studies

hence

communities need

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modernised ,committed students who can teach them new technology.

For instance

,

community

members have little knowledge

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how to use

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a laptop

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.

Thus

,in an environment of elderly people, children can be helpful with their academic

skills

. To conclude, indeed

community

people benefit university

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by teaching them different

skills

and values, whilst they contribute by sharing what they have been studying.