Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

abortion

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rate is increasing significantly and it is a controversy all around the world. Some segments of society think that it should be legal and others argue that it should be banned. In

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views will be discussed and

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illustrate my personal point of view regarding

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abortion

. Standing with support's view,

abortion

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to take care of a

baby

. Mother's unintentionally become pregnant even though they do not want

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at that stage.

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, many young girls pregnant who study in school or

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are not suppose

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fulfill

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the mother's responsibilities in

both

financial and mental criteria.

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abortion

should allow legally

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will help give a right to

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couples

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when they want to take a

baby

On the other hand

abortion

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for a mother's health as well as a murder of a

baby

. A girl can face many health problems due to

abortion

such

as physical

disorder

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, breast cancer,

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joint-pain

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and many other diseases.

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female life, it should be banned. In conclusion, we have discussed

both

views

abortion

should be banned or it should be legally allowed and

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effects of

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of the time people abort a

baby

due to their financial problems.

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