Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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rate is increasing significantly and it is a controversy all around the world. Some segments of society think that it should be legal and others argue that it should be banned. In

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is a good thing for those couples who are not in

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to take care of a

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the mother's responsibilities in

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financial and mental criteria.

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should allow legally

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when they want to take a

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for a mother's health as well as a murder of a

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. A girl can face many health problems due to

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, breast cancer,

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and many other diseases.

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female life, it should be banned. In conclusion, we have discussed

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views

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should be banned or it should be legally allowed and

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of the time people abort a

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due to their financial problems.

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, I should be banned but the government should make some policies for financial support for

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take

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that all popular TV programs should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Student learn far more with their teachers than other sources (the Internet or television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some developed countries now have unemployment problems. Why do people still want to immigrate to these countries? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.