Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it has become very difficult to keep
children
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discipline
. A number of people believe that penalizing Add an article
the discipline
children
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however
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by some others that emblazoning can be more beneficial for redirecting Wrong verb form
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children
towards Use synonyms
prefferable
behaviour. Correct your spelling
preferable
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essay will go through both Linking Words
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viewpoints
view points
to get Correct your spelling
viewpoints
on
the conclusion.
To start with, Change preposition
to
i
think punishment can Change the capitalization
I
left
imprints in Change the verb form
leave
be left
children
's Use synonyms
mind
. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
For instance
, if a child is being punished Linking Words
at
every little mistake there is a possibility that he might not try to improve himself though he would Change preposition
for
knew
that his efforts will be overlooked. Change the verb form
know
Moreover
, there are Linking Words
also
chances for Linking Words
children
to get less expressive. They would be fearful to open up their thoughts and Use synonyms
lead
to Wrong verb form
leading
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the stage
a stage
stage
of depression and anxiety. But, some disciplinary actions to maintain the rules and regulations of pupils' lives, are very important.
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stages
Consequently
, Rewarding Linking Words
children
plays an essential role to encourage Use synonyms
children
to do good Use synonyms
works
. I believe it boosts their confidence not only Fix the agreement mistake
work
for
study perspectives but Change preposition
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also
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for
behavioural growth. Change preposition
in
For example
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proportion
of Correct article usage
the proportion
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misbehaved
mis behaved
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misbehaved
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mislead
misleaded
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misled
children
is much more in India as Use synonyms
compare
to other Wrong verb form
compared
Europian
countries,which is being due to Correct your spelling
European
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
praisement
towards Correct your spelling
appraisement
placement
children
.
In conclusion, a suitable and harmless punishment is fine to apply to keep Use synonyms
children
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on
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in
right
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the right
directions
but they must not be ignored Fix the agreement mistake
direction
on
making Change preposition
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