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Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, it has become very difficult to keep
children
 in
discipline
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. A number of people believe that penalizing
children
 is a good way to keep them disciplined
however
 it is been
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 by some others that emblazoning can be more beneficial for redirecting
children
 towards
prefferable
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preferable
 behaviour.
This
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view points
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viewpoints
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 to get
on
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 the conclusion. To start with,
i
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 think punishment can
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 imprints in
children
's
mind
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.
For instance
, if a child is being punished
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 every little mistake there is a possibility that he might not try to improve himself though he would
knew
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 that his efforts will be overlooked.
Moreover
, there are
also
 chances for
children
 to get less expressive. They would be fearful to open up their thoughts and
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 to
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the stage
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stage
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 of depression and anxiety. But, some disciplinary actions to maintain the rules and regulations of pupils' lives, are very important.
Consequently
, Rewarding
children
 plays an essential role to encourage
children
 to do good
works
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. I believe it boosts their confidence not only
for
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 study perspectives but
also
for
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 behavioural growth.
For example
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
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misbehaved
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mis behaved
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misbehaved
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 and
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mislead
misleaded
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misled
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children
 is much more in India as
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 to other
Europian
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European
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 countries,which is being due to
lack
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 of
praisement
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appraisement
placement
 towards
children
. In conclusion, a suitable and harmless punishment is fine to apply to keep
children
on
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right
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directions
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 but they must not be ignored
on
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 making
right
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 choices.
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