Some people say that the best way to teach children to behave well is to punish them. Others argue that rewarding and praising children is a better way to teach them the difference betweeen right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it has become very difficult to keep

children

in

discipline

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. A number of people believe that penalizing

children

is a good way to keep them disciplined

however

it is been

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by some others that emblazoning can be more beneficial for redirecting

children

towards

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preferable

behaviour.

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view points

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to get

on

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the conclusion. To start with,

i

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think punishment can

left

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imprints in

children

's

mind

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.

For instance

, if a child is being punished

at

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every little mistake there is a possibility that he might not try to improve himself though he would

knew

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that his efforts will be overlooked.

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, there are

also

chances for

children

to get less expressive. They would be fearful to open up their thoughts and

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to

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the stage

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of depression and anxiety. But, some disciplinary actions to maintain the rules and regulations of pupils' lives, are very important.

Consequently

, Rewarding

children

plays an essential role to encourage

children

to do good

works

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. I believe it boosts their confidence not only

for

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study perspectives but

also

for

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behavioural growth.

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of

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misbehaved

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mis behaved

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and

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mislead

misleaded

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children

is much more in India as

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to other

Europian

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countries,which is being due to

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of

praisement

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appraisement

placement

towards

children

. In conclusion, a suitable and harmless punishment is fine to apply to keep

children

on

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right

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directions

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but they must not be ignored

on

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making

right

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choices.