Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that building more places where
people
can play Use synonyms
sports
is the most effective way to improve the Use synonyms
health
of the population while others claim that Use synonyms
this
would have only a negligible effect on public Linking Words
health
. Use synonyms
This
essay agrees with the latter rather than the former view, Linking Words
however
, both of them will be analyzed.
It is certainly true, that building a new Linking Words
sports
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facility
has positive effects on Use synonyms
people
's behaviour. Use synonyms
For example
, if the new Linking Words
facility
allows playing a sport that was not possible to practice before Use synonyms
then
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people
that do not play any sport would be able to try it for the Use synonyms
first
time and some of them can get engaged and start playing it. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
can make Linking Words
otherwise
sedentary Linking Words
people
exercise. Use synonyms
However
, the majority of the changes that the new Linking Words
facility
brings are only temporary or they make only a little difference. Returning to the example, uncommon Use synonyms
sports
are only played by a reduced number of Use synonyms
people
and most of the new players quit practising the sport in the Use synonyms
first
months.
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On the other hand
, other measures Linking Words
such
as teaching Linking Words
sports
and the importance of doing exercise in high school and college have proved to be more effective. Making Use synonyms
people
aware of the importance of playing Use synonyms
sports
is something that can create an everlasting change in their behaviour because learning the devastating effects that sedentarism has on Use synonyms
health
can make Use synonyms
people
start a new healthier lifestyle. Use synonyms
Additionally
, there are other measures that are not related at all to Linking Words
sports
because Use synonyms
health
is not only dependent on the amount of physical activity but Use synonyms
also
on diet, stress level and the consumption of drugs. Those are other factors that must be taken into account in order to develop ideas to improve public Linking Words
health
.
To conclude, even though building a new Use synonyms
sports
Use synonyms
facility
can be positive, other measures Use synonyms
such
as teaching about Linking Words
health
in school can be more effective because their effects Use synonyms
last
longer and reach more Linking Words
people
.Use synonyms
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