You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter ● explain where the restaurant is ● describe what you ate in the restaurant ● say why you would recommend the restaurant to others

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a local resident of Hyderabad, I always admire your news articles from your newspaper and always found them very effective and useful. I want to share the experience my family and I got on our

last

visit to one of the local restaurants which

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quite impressive and

delivers

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amazing food. The restaurant is located in the heart of the city and it is known as Spice of India, it is just 3

minutes

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walk from our famous local museum. I would recommend the food here is extremely satisfying, we tried all different dishes, I would say their seafood is delicious and

mouth watering

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. I would like you to publish some good points about

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restaurant in your news article and I want to recommend

this

place to all other local residents of our city to try their food at least once and

also

I can say they will even experience the best hospitality in

this

restaurant. I hope that you found these recommendations of use. Please do not hesitate to drop

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line to me if you need any more information on

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. Yours Sincerely, Sam Billings

Submitted by mujahidmehdi1996 on Mon Apr 04 2022

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You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter ● explain where the restaurant is ● describe what you ate in the restaurant ● say why you would recommend the restaurant to others

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and giv your opinion.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?