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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #situation #job #shortage #money
Nowadays, it is considered by some
people
 that it is common to suffer from
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situation
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such
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 career they don't like and lack of expenses. In my opinion, I believe that they need to understand the current
situation
 to some extent and try their best to overcome those unfortunate situations. On the one hand, it is important for
people
 to understand that they might not enjoy working
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the
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 current position and
also
 might suffer from not
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 enough money to afford the expenses. The reason is if
people
 are too ambitious to get much more income than they deserve, they tend to do unacceptable things like selling
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confidential data to other companies in
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 firms and cheating the contracts to earn many profits.
On the other hand
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 to be taken into consideration is that
people
 still
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 to find
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 effective solution in order to solve the areas they are lacking.
Moreover
, they still need to find various kinds of way to deal with the current
situation
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negative impacts on their lives. Take different kinds of billionaires as an example. The books mentioning their biographies indicate that
people
 need to fight for the best to be able to achieve the things they desire with strong effort and commitment. In conclusion, in my opinion, it is important for humans to make themselves accept
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reality while finding the solution to cope with the current
situation
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effects
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 their lives so that they can be better and better by improving themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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