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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THERE ARE THINGS INDIVIDUALS CAN DO TO HELP PREVENT GLOBAL CLIMATE CHANGE. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ACTION BY INDIVIDUALS IS USELESS AND IRRELEVANT AND THAT IT IS ONLY GOVERNMENT AND LARGE BUSINESESS WHICH CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Global warming is a crucial issue that has impacted every country around the world. Some individuals concur that the public can contribute a lot towards environmental changes while others argue that solely the government and big commerce can mitigate the issue.
This
 essay shall elicit all the justifications and precedents of both given views in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, individual involvement plays an essential role in solving the worsening atmosphere issue.
In other words
, one action can spread to others and create more participants. There are billions of people in the universe, if everyone has an environmentally-friendly attitude in the way of
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trash, conserving water and recycling products,
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 the general public can save the planet
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 massive devastation.
Additionally
, reforestation is another way in which people can contribute greatly. An example of
this
, planting trees
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 every person may reduce carbon dioxide by releasing oxygen, in
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 it will have a positive impact on preventing global climate
change
.
On the other hand
, the government and big companies can bring about a huge
change
 because of the availability of power and resources.
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, the legislative bodies should come up with
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solutions,
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banning
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plastic bags and preventing cutting the
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. In that actions, big product manufacturing companies can limit their waste production and utilize products
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 are not harmful to the environment.
However
, any of these steps is not implementable without the help of the people.
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, individuals should obey the rules
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 the government. As an inference, I firmly believe that the authorities and big enterprises combined with every citizen should take part in the process of preventing
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climate destruction. The problem of global climate
change
 needs to be tackled at every level to bring about a real
change
 in our environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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