A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Hi Bob, Hope you're and your family doing well. I'm sorry I haven't been in touch with you for
such
a long age but it was great to receive your letter yesterday, buddy, in which you told me that you've changed your
last
academy and currently you encounter some funny issues.
Firstly
,I'd like to tell you about the brief history of Saint Marry Schools I think its the best schooling system where students around the world sign up for elementary institute
Furthermore
, it's very handy to become friends with faculty by offering some snacks and playing soccer with them
in addition
, pupils are very friendly and adorable it's not a big deal buddy.
for example
it's normal when you hit to a new place and you won't have enough knowledge and information its look like a new environment but with the passage of months you will become familiar with it it's the reality of life my dear friend.
Secondly
, If you still can't find a suitable relationship
then
it'll be a better option you should join the music club because you are quite happy with
such
activities
furthermore
, that school is quite famous due to competitions and racing programmes that will be another age for you.
Lastly
, I'd like to say to you that a book is the best friend of all time try to make a habit of reading books in your free time that will not only enhance your knowledge but
also
be advantageous. Lots of Love, Shaban
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduce yourself
  • genuine interest
  • rapport
  • like-minded individuals
  • school community
  • volunteer
  • open-minded
  • comfort zone
  • casual setting
  • hobbies and activities
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