Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

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era is the competitive
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they do compete with colleagues
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age or older or younger.
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and foremost reason to compete is that
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higher pay or position
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new thinking and better
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ability than older people work in the organization. But older employees try to keep their position. Which enhances the gap between them . Another reason is that they try to pull
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each other in front of everyone .
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unease to work sometime.
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circumstances. Now moving to solutions management can play
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should make friendly environment .so that they can get proper outcomes. They should have appropriate tasks for each employee according to their ability .
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nobody fights back .
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, every group has every age member so that they can get something from an experienced person and they have
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. To recapitulate, Old people and youngsters have a relationship
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skin and nails . Both should help each other without any interference from others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Intergenerational competition
  • Age discrimination
  • Adaptability
  • Hiring practices
  • Workforce diversity
  • Upskilling
  • Lifelong learning
  • Flexible working arrangements
  • Ageism
  • Technological proficiency
  • Productivity concerns
  • Diverse skillsets
  • Legislative protection
  • Employment equity
  • Biases
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