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Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these both view and give your own opinion

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It is often argued by some individuals that higher institution
students
 should read whatever they like while some people hold the perspective that they should be allowed to study
courses
 that will be beneficial in the nearest future.I will discuss both views but in my opinion,I believed that
students
 should be allowed to engage in
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what ever
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courses
that suites
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 them because
it's promotes
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high
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level
 of concentration. On one hand, allowing undergraduates to study only on
science related
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courses
 brings about higher chances of getting employed after school.In the society we are today,
science
students
tends
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 to be more productive than others because of
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 of technology
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 and
also
,they can
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 self-employed without waiting for the government to provide it for them.
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 research conducted in Australia among
students
 indicated that 85% choose
science
courses
 because of higher job opportunities than
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courses
.So studying
science related
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course
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 is
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 reason being that it secures the future of an individual especially when
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 to career.
On the other hand
, giving undergraduates the
chances
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 to choose their
courses
 have
a
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greater merit because of
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the high
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level
 of concentration.Whenever an individual is being allowed to choose
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 they like,they
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 to put in more effort making sure that they come out with flying colours.
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 they
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 better without coming out with poor grades.
For instance
,it has been observed by some individuals that the reason why they failed
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 a result of lack of interest in that particular
course
,maybe because
they
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guardian
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 push them to study
course
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 that they don't like. To sum up,
this
 essay discussed why
students
 should be allowed to choose whatever
course
 they cherish because it increases
level
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 of concentration but why undergraduates should focus on STEM
courses
 because it raises the chances of getting a job.In my opinion,I believed that allowing
students
 to take
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course
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 of their choice is the best because it brings about
high
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level
 of focus
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 their academics.
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