Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays connections between nations are easier than in the past.
Hence
society all over the world
has access to the same products and by purchasing them they appear like others. I believe it has some demerits like destroying ancient heritages and several merits such
as decreasing differences of people that cause some problems among countries.
In terms of negative consequences, as far as the different societies become more similar, historical culture and ceremonies are more being
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of Yalda which is one of our oldest ceremonies. In addition
, the decline of worldwide differences may cause a fall in their innovation in the world
because it is the difference that made communities do different work and propose different ideas. However
, it can provide several well-known effects.
Turn to positive effects, the more similar populations probably tend to make challenges less than different people and it can provide a world
with more peace and safety. A recent report in Times Newspaper Argued that nations with the same culture and language could live with each other with more stability. Furthermore
, this
leads to making
development in poor countries because these countries' people acquire more confidence and try to improve themselves. Verb problem
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As a result
, the world
will witness a more peaceful place.
In conclusion, despite the similarities may cause some pros and cons, they may lead to positive effects if they are managed and could make a better worldwide life.Submitted by asghar.khorram on
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task response
In the introduction, clearly state your position on whether the trend of countries becoming more similar due to the availability of the same products is positive or negative. Provide a thesis statement that outlines your stance and the main points you will discuss in the essay.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces the main idea of the paragraph. Use transition words and phrases to link ideas between paragraphs and create a cohesive flow of information.