Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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live their whole
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in native places rather than moving to other areas.
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habit has a few advantages,
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are some disadvantages
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are worth considering. Because of family and property
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they might not wish to relocate from their own place
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could miss a lot of great job opportunities in their
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, the main benefit is easily getting family support
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a personal career.
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, if we grew up with parents, they will look after us and siblings will assist us to study well. And
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they will recommend based on their own experience to screw up our
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smoothly.
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, financially can able to be stable and do not need to take risks because capital investment can get from relatives.
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, my father and mother did not move out of any place even
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within our district but they have been being full of happiness and satisfaction. The main drawbacks are
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can not able gain vast knowledge about their professional
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career
and unable to experience
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other
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do not move out from their own city, they will not get any risk and
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self
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their
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.
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they will not get a chance to know about different technologies as well,
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to step up their
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to get a new chance outside of their province
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they may not able to develop
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their
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did not step away from their mother lane and stay
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long there.
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have not migrated and probably they think that they will not get family support
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they will miss good job offers as well. In my point of view, after
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people
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should move away from their home town which will lead to developing a lot.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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