People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. Which are these problems? Should government encourage people to move to small regional areas?

Lifestyle generally refers to how a person lives ,tech has enabled us to generally increase the size of usual societies meaning it's easier for you to tell what someone in Australia is doing ,
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they ate n what are their general views on life e.g religion, society constructs ,
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it's arguable that you might not be living but to an
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we can refer to the social world as
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society for the stupid so since we are all connected n all share what we do in our everyday lives it's mostly common for a human (it's human nature ) that you follow an individual or individuals which
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as alpha or top of the food chain so in our
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it's usually western societies n their people
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why you use Netflix ,Twitter ,
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why you want milkshakes
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of umxhanxha that's why you want a Mercedes driving boyfriend so yess socially I would say extremely negative
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in terms of technically and feasibility wise it's positive

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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