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In many part of the world, women study science and technology but do not work in these fields. What measures can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

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In many countries,
women
 have been educated in fields
such
 as science and technology but they do not
work
 in these fields. in my ,opinion the government can do some policies to encourage them to
work
 in their
field
. At
first
, the government should apply some facilities for
women
.
For example
, maternity leave is one the most things for
women
 order if they get pregnant they often should quit their job. So, if they have a plan to have a baby they will never start working.
Moreover
, the government should make the
companies
 buy welfare insurance for their employees.
Consequently
, people especially
women
 have been encouraged to
work
 in their
field
 in big
companies
.
Secondly
,
women
 need a safe workplace. In many countries,
women
 have been exceeded in their
work
 and they do not tell anybody because they think they do not have any advocate. So,
companies
 should improve their human resource department and maybe
women
 feel better.
In addition
, in many
companies
,
women
 do not have the same salary in the same positions which men
work
.
this
 can be the biggest issue that why
women
 do not
work
 in their
field
. Perhaps, if they feel equal with men they have been encouraged to
work
 hard and start working in their
field
. in conclusion, in any part of the world, there are some
women
 who have been studied some major like engineering but they don't
work
 in their
field
 because of bad facilities, low income rather than men or they don't have a safe workplace.
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