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Some people say that teh best way to improve public health is by incressing the numbe of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other messures are required.

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 the development of modern society, the
health
 public has become an issue, some
people
 believe that increasing the amount of
activities
facilities
 would help to improve general public
health
. Others believe different measures should be taken into an account. According to researchers, they all agree that doing physical
activities
 the general body
health
 improves.
Therefore
, providing more public
facilities
 for the general public to perform different
activities
 is the best way to promote good
health
 in the population accompanied by education about how to maintain general wellbeing. Good habits in general including a healthy diet contribute to better public
health
. Taking myself as an example, I use to come from work and stay at home watching TV most evenings, I used to have
health
 issues often,
however
, after the new sports facility opened close by my home, I started attending the gym classes and swimming, gradually I started to maintain the habit of exercising and since
then
 my
health
 has improved considerably.
On the other hand
,
people
 need education in good habits,
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 those
facilities
 will become a waste for the whole society.
Therefore
 we should try different measures to improve public
health
,
for instance
 creating more green paths to encourage
people
 to ride bikes
instead
 of driving for short distances and educating
people
 who need it. To sum up, we should not only focus on creating more physical
activities
facilities
 to improve public
health
, but
people
 should
also
 consider other measures to maintain general wellbeing.
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