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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory. Write a report for a university tutor decribing the production process. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

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The diagram shows
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how to produce
plastic
 paper clips in a small factory. Overall, molten
plastic
 will undergo
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3
colors
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 distinction
such
 as red, blue, and yellow.
Therefater
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Thereafter
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 it will undergo
standard
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 control check and will be
pack
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 and
despatch
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. The process begins with molten
plastic
 and it undergoes
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different
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color
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 moulding like red, blue, and yellow. All these
colors
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 will
passed
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 by quality control,
this
 is the time that the machine will check the maximum strength of the item. Some products will get rejected.
However
, those
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successful
 produce item is sorted out manually by hand.
Thereafter
, mixed
colours
 will be collected
same
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with
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 the single
colours
. Other unknown products from sorting out will be disregarded. To continue, both mixed
colours
 and single
colours
 are placed under quality control and it checked
colour
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 mixture and singles. All finished products of coloured
plastic
 paper clips
is
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 for packing and despatch.
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