People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the

evulotion

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evolution

of commercialization, the

habits

of shopping have significantly changed from past to present.When it comes to the issues

about

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what

factors

mainly affect human shopping

habits

,someone argues that age principally

determine

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perchasing

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purchasing

habits

. Personally,

i

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agree

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both

opinion

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. in the

frst

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first

place.admittedly.aae is one of the essential

element

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elements

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to influence individual

habits

in buying products.

Firstly

,the young aged people are normally willing to use

convinient

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convenient

online shopping website or application to purchase commodities whereas the elder merely

insist

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to

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on

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traditional outline shopping like buying goods in supermarket or downtown street.

Moreover

, younger people are keen to

accpet

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accept

more fashionable good,

for instance

in terms of shoes they will cost higher price to buy a pair of AJ

sneekers

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sneakers

,but for old

people

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they much value shoes'

factors

of cost-effective and comfortable.

Addtionally

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Additionally

, a brunch of other vital

factors

such

as culture and gender

egually

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equally

equality

influence trade.Various

culture

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cultures

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in the world

have

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raised

a

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phenomenon that different cultural

groug

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groups

possess diverse shopping

habits

.Specifically,

Chinese

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the Chinese

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habituate to

buy

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buying

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red clothes to celebrate spring festival and

American

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Americans

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are accustomed to

purchase

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purchasing

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turkey when approaching

to

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Christmas.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

,in terms of gender,

male

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males

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are

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is

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more likely to be oriented by the results of goods purchased,

nevertheless

female

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females

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attach more importance to the process of shopping with friends. To sum up,

i

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acknowledge that age group exactly determine human shopping

habits

to some extent and

likewise

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some other

factors

change purchasing customs.