Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Note: This essay uses our new

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In my opinion, I believe that young people do not have as much respect for their teachers as in the past. I feel

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with,there are many ways for students to learn nowadays, which means they are less reliant on teachers than in the past. A few years ago, children could only acquire new skills by going to school and attending classes, so they respected their faculty a lot. My personal experience is a compelling example of

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. For the past few years, I have studied English almost every single day. I

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my vocabulary by using some applications for the

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language and over the

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. which helps me learn

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new stuff daily. and I

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practice them daily.

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important as they used to be. If I had tried to become proficient in English around 15 years ago, I would have depended on a teacher.

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, faculty are no longer strict nowadays,

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children don’t fear them at all.

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problem is very common in

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, a few months ago my little brother used profanity when addressing his math coach. Surprisingly, he wasn’t punished for

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bad behaviour. His teacher was afraid of how our parents would react to my brother being punished, so he just ignored it. Since

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and is often quite rude. Based on

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experience, I strongly feel that young people do not respect educators like they did in the past. in n nutshell, I am of the opinion that nowadays

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students honour their educators less than they used to do in the past.

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coherence and cohesion

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Note: This essay uses our new

Include an introduction and conclusion

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