Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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is a necessary subject in most

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primary and high

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. While some

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think that it is important to know about your own

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, some others argue that

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belongs to the past and it is

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science

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that

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the future. From my point of view, I think that it

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that we learn, and most essentially learn from

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history

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.

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have every reason to think that

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and technology

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more than plain

history

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. Scientific studies and technological

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are the main reasons that we could move in from

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history

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and achieve what we have achieved nowadays.

History

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is the story made by

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in the past, while development in

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and technology is the key to the future which we must rely on in order to make stories of our own.

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, by learning

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you could not learn about how

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a building, how to produce electricity more effectively, or how to grow more food from the soil. These are the things that are essential to our daily life.

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, a massive historical knowledge would not contribute anything to the development of these

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.

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, I think is it still necessary to learn

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. Our life span is short

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to the long river of

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. Things that one can learn during a lifetime

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always limited.

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, it is meaningful to learn from the experience of other

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.

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is basically a study of

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's

experience

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experiences

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in the past. What we learn from the outdated events and

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might still apply to some aspects of our

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modern

society and

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reflecting

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, I think the

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of the

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Adolf Hitler should always be taught and

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. It is a lesson that our

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had paid a significant price for, and should not be easily forgotten. By knowing

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history

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and its miserable consequences we are able to notice

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ealier

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earlier

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and have a greater chance to prevent

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from happening again

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time. In conclusion, I do agree that

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and technology are more important

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that

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history

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in

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respect to creating a better future.

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, it is

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important to keep our

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in mind in order

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ti

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avoid

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happened before.