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The knowledge we gain from our personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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People could gain more knowledge from many resources. Examples of those include reading books,learning from experienced people, studying by themselves with online searching, and more practice.
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, in my opinion, practical learning which may be from real circumstances outweighs theoretical knowledge. One of the reasons is that the public may obtain deeply perception from their own experiences.
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, students who do more practice in mathematics. It seems quite get a higher score than some who only read books. Another situation is starting a new job in a new workplace. Actually, it is likely difficult on working with responsibilities the
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 time. Over the months, it becomes obviously easier than in the beginning because they are familiar with their roles by relatively doing several times.
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, if the public face a critical problem. It is still hard to tackle at
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, when they overcome the situation.
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 time one may find the solution easily rather than the
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