«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

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With the development of
sports
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, there is
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a need for
sports
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facilities, and more and more
people
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are involved in
sports
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. About what the government should allocate money for, for the equipment of
athletes
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or for ordinary
people
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, there are still disputes and discussions. In my opinion,
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the government should allocate money for the best
athletes
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. Since they bring fame, fame by winning at important competitions or at the Olympic Games. In order to bring
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glory to your state and receive medals, they must,
first
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of all, be provided with new and high-quality equipment and good conditions. All
this
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rests on the shoulders of the state.
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,
athletes
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who take pride
of
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place
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their place
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in competitions, holding the national flag high, give motivation, strength and energy to ordinary
people
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.‌‌ Based on
this
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, there is
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the other side of the coin, money from the state budget should
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be allocated for the development of
sports
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for ordinary
people
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. I believe that ordinary
people
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have the right to engage in and be involved in various
sports
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. If you create opportunities for the local population to engage in various
sports
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,
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they will have even more respect and understanding of
athletes
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, young
people
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will be motivated and in the
future
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there is a great chance that they will become better
athletes
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.‌‌
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,
athletes
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who take pride
of
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in
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place
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their place
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in competitions, holding the national flag high, give motivation, strength and energy to ordinary
people
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.‌‌ In conclusion, in my opinion, both ordinary
people
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and
athletes
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need opportunities. Since all the best
athletes
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on the world stage come from the common
people
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • elite sports facilities
  • national pride
  • international events
  • participation
  • high-quality
  • performance
  • national representation
  • fairness
  • social issues
  • population health
  • well-being
  • accessible
  • inclusive
  • community involvement
  • sponsorship
  • endorsements
  • recreational facilities
  • inspire
  • younger generations
  • serious pursuit
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