«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

These days,

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is developing. The

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spend a huge

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's evolution. Some

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opine that

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should allocate more quantity of

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on

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sports

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facilities

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for top

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. While other

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of

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think that

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should be expended

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ordinary

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potentials

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. I strongly agree with the idea that the

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should be spent by

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on typical

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sport

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facilities

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. As far as I

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, they need more investment than the top

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, because they

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not as

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as the top ones. So,

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of

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they need some attention and investment to be improved in

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. Top

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can find

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way to have the

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facilities

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by themselves. As they are good

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they can easily find investors. So they cannot find any difficulties in terms of

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.

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, there are some top

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that

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not enough

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sport

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. And can be needed for help with it. They can address to

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for

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to improve the comfort in

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. In conclusion, I want to give my own opinion. From my point of view, the

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should pay attention to both of them, because both should be invested

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improved, as the

sport

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is one of the most important things to be developed.