Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Art

is a beautiful creation.It is considered by some people that

art

should be a needed subject for students.

However

,others believe it is non-valuable.Before arriving at my position both sides of the argument will be elaborated

further

.

To begin

with, discussing the first viewpoint,

art

can develop gross motor skills in children.To explain it, there are so many various types of

art

as well as

tools

such

as a pencil, brush, and colours required by an

art

class.For ,student it is a real struggle

while

drawing to develop their muscle

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hold, and use objects correctly.

Art

class teach children to hold the method of paintbrush,pencil, and marker,

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their muscles

while

playing with paper.

Moreover

,

art

can generate artists feeling.To explicate it, during drawing creator has to concentrate. and have an inside feeling.

For example

,in 2018,revealed by the world

art

system that 70% of artists regulate their own minds' feelings

such

as their lives

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or happier movements in the drawing.

On the other hand

,

also

art

subject has some drawbacks.

Firstly

, with the graduation of an

art

subject has

low

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chances

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chance

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to get

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of getting

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a higher salary job in future,a few

artisartistsomes

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artists are

successful and famous among the public,

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but only

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some creators get

higher

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more

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money

regarding

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for

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their work.

For example

,the survey has found only 20 out of 100

art

artists are famous

as well as

higher salaries.The very famous artist Luis

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has 400 dollars per

art

. In conclusion,it is true that

art

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less popular among people.I largely believe that it has its own merits like improving motor skills,

generates

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inside feeling in the paper.